I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia ora oliva, this is good but you need to fix the size!! you know for your millimetre what happen if someones nail was big would what that hei(be) i whakaaro(think) you should add atu(more) writing in your whakaata(slide) anyway really good bye!
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kia ora oliva, this is good but you need to fix the size!! you know for your millimetre what happen if someones nail was big would what that hei(be) i whakaaro(think) you should add atu(more) writing in your whakaata(slide) anyway really good bye!
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