I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Olivia I love the amount of detail you have put in your post. have you thought of maybe putting more of an explanation so people know what you are posting about.
Kia ora Olivia it your.darling mama here. I love this one, it is one of my favourite blog post.With so much rainbow colours and lovely things said about your big sister.Maybe next time you could try and put some WOW words in your blog post. I am very proud of your work on your blog Olivia . Keep up the great work.Love your darling mama xxxx
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Kia ora Olivia
ReplyDeleteI love the amount of detail you have put in your post. have you thought of maybe putting more of an explanation so people know what you are posting about.
Kia ora Olivia it your.darling mama here.
ReplyDeleteI love this one, it is one of my favourite blog post.With so much rainbow colours and lovely things said about your big sister.Maybe next time you could try and put some WOW words in your blog post. I am very proud of your work on your blog Olivia . Keep up the great work.Love your darling mama xxxx