I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tālofa lava Olivia. I am so glad to see some of your Literacy learning being posted and super happy to see you are learning about Māori Myths and Legends. This is a really cool resource to be able tp use and learn with. Maybe for future work, you could add more details and elaborate your ideas. End of sentence punctuation would be great too.
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Tālofa lava Olivia.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad to see some of your Literacy learning being posted and super happy to see you are learning about Māori Myths and Legends. This is a really cool resource to be able tp use and learn with.
Maybe for future work, you could add more details and elaborate your ideas. End of sentence punctuation would be great too.
next time try to make it bigger
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