I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora, Olivia I like your work because lots of people really like netball I like football a lot I practise football at home I wonder if you play netball at home. Maybe you could put a more facts because I like facts. e noho rā
Kia ora Olivia H You did nui I Ka pai that you did it with a pukapuka with you tuhi In it When it was the day that the class had to make a side or other writing ways how long did it took you to make what did. Pai mai Orlando
kia ora its Nikau. i like the book that you made.how did you get all of those facts about netball.next time try to put your camera closer so we can read it and see it.
Hi Olivia you did a great job on this i like your slide you should be netballer when you are a year 5,6,7 and 8 and i also like the book you made netball i think you are going to be a netball star and also in school you are a star keep on doing what your doing and great job bye
Kia ora Olivia, Good job! You have done so well, I'm very FLABBERGASTED. Next time you could add how you did this, Why did you do this? When did you do this? I think you have done very well, bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora, Olivia I like your work because lots of people really like netball I like football a lot I practise football at home I wonder if you play netball at home. Maybe you could put a more facts because I like facts.
ReplyDeletee noho rā
Kia ora Olivia H You did nui I Ka pai that you did it with a
ReplyDeletepukapuka with you
tuhi In it When it was the day that the class had to make a side or other writing ways how long did it took you to make what did.
Pai mai Orlando
Can you make the words bigger on page 2 Iit was hard to read
Deletekia ora its Nikau. i like the book that you made.how did you get all of those facts about netball.next time try to put your camera closer so we can read it and see it.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia excellent work you did i really liked the bit were you drown the bull maybe next time you should show a little bit more on the pichers.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia you did a great job on this i like your slide you should be netballer when you are a year 5,6,7 and 8 and i also like the book you made netball i think you are going to be a netball star and also in school you are a star keep on doing what your doing and great job bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteGood job! You have done so well, I'm very FLABBERGASTED. Next time you could add how you did this, Why did you do this? When did you do this? I think you have done very well, bye.