I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Olivia Lacie and Trinity here, We like your blog post about when you went for an adventure in the sky it is really cool. Maybe next time you could add some information about your blog post?
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Kia Ora Olivia Lacie and Trinity here,
ReplyDeleteWe like your blog post about when you went for an adventure in the sky it is really cool. Maybe next time you could add some information about your blog post?
Blog you later.
Hi olivia that is amazing like it it look real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI see you were using remove bg. i like how you said that you ate cotton candy. next time i think you should work on your grama.
ReplyDeleteHi Oliva H I like your blog post.
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