I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Olivia, these are excellent photographs.It would be super cool if you could give a little narrative about whats happening. Looks like you made a pot or painted a pot?Is that your hair, it looks amazing.Stay awesome.
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Hi Olivia, these are excellent photographs.It would be super cool if you could give a little narrative about whats happening. Looks like you made a pot or painted a pot?Is that your hair, it looks amazing.Stay awesome.
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