I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Olivia Trinity here. I like your blog post about Kiwi Can. Kiwi Can is so much fun. Maybe next time you could add a longer information part at the top.
Kia Ora Olivia Bea here, I like your blog and did you know you did great at your blog and make sure you put more things about our kiwi can so we can see how we worked to together and learn more things!
Hello Olivia! I like your kiwi can post! but..did you think about re checking if your words are right.. anyway other than that it's good! why did you wanna right about kiwi can? also, can you add more detail? anyway that's all i can say, blog you layter! (please reply!)
hi olivia its benaiah i like the way you put the cool background you brought me back to when we did it it was so fun next time you can put more slides by
Bounjour Olivia it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about kiwi can remember for next time to add a sentance or two to explain what kiwi can is. Apart from that great job.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Olivia Trinity here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Kiwi Can. Kiwi Can is so much fun.
Maybe next time you could add a longer information part at the top.
Blog you later~Trinity.
Kia Ora Olivia Bea here,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog and did you know you did great at your blog and make sure you put more things about our kiwi can so we can see how we worked to together and learn more things!
Hello Olivia! I like your kiwi can post! but..did you think about re checking if your words are right.. anyway other than that it's good!
ReplyDeletewhy did you wanna right about kiwi can? also, can you add more detail? anyway that's all i can say, blog you layter! (please reply!)
i like it it looks cool that remindid me of that day i did not think that you whod put that on you must of liked that by the way it is TS.RN
ReplyDeletehi olivia its benaiah
ReplyDeletei like the way you put the cool background
you brought me back to when we did it it was so fun
next time you can put more slides
by
Bounjour Olivia it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about kiwi can remember for next time to add a sentance or two to explain what kiwi can is.
Apart from that great job.