I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
when i was looking at this post it was great but it was a little hard to read. but maybe next time you could change the font colour to a colour that is easy to read and also you could make the font bigger next time. but thats all you need to fix. but i like your post. What did you like about that post, did anyone do that post with you. #AWESOME~CHRISTINA
Hi Liv It's Hakeem And YOU ARE SO GOOD AT MATHS AND I'M SO BAD! Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Slide Animation. See You Next Time I Comment On Your Blog. Bye.
Hi olivia good job on the questions you got them correct you brought me back to when I first learned my times tables you should of done a little bit more bye.
Kia ora Olivia. Isabella here. I really like like your post. Question is? What made you want to make a blog post about math? And did you really have to put a chocolate bar that looks so realistic You make people Hungry. Also you could add more writing and make it bigger or something. Anyways blog ya later Bye! #COOL!
Kia ora Oliva it is lacie here. Great job on your blog post about math magic. Maybe next time you could add a sentance or two about what you had to do. What is math magic is it a website?
kia ora oliva I enjoyed the part when you explained what you did. Did you think about make the words a bit bigger so I don't have to squint my eyes to read it. How come you made this post.
Kia ora Olivia Its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe School, I like you math magic google drawing it is really cool, Maybe next time add a bit more about the maths you are learning and explain it a better better. But that is all I have to talk about so bye!
Kia ora olivia, Nice job! it's just I can't see the words quite well so just next time please put it in a different colour or font. I like how you have an example of a chocolate mhm yum! - Milla
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi a olivia i would like to say that i like the chocolate in it but for next time you should put a animated chocolate blog you later...
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia, Christina here!
ReplyDeletewhen i was looking at this post it was great but it was a little hard to read. but maybe next time you could change the font colour to a colour that is easy to read and also you could make the font bigger next time. but thats all you need to fix. but i like your post. What did you like about that post, did anyone do that post with you. #AWESOME~CHRISTINA
Hi Liv It's Hakeem And YOU ARE SO GOOD AT MATHS AND I'M SO BAD! Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Slide Animation. See You Next Time I Comment On Your Blog. Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi olivia good job on the questions you got them correct you brought me back to when I first learned my times tables you should of done a little bit more bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia.
ReplyDeleteIsabella here.
I really like like your post.
Question is? What made you want to make a blog post about math?
And did you really have to put a chocolate bar that looks so realistic You make people Hungry.
Also you could add more writing and make it bigger or something.
Anyways blog ya later Bye! #COOL!
Kia ora Oliva it is lacie here.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your blog post about math magic.
Maybe next time you could add a sentance or two about what you had to do.
What is math magic is it a website?
Kia Ora Kian here I like how you explained what you did. Maybe next time you could explain what you next step is.
ReplyDeletekia ora oliva
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you explained what you did.
Did you think about make the words a bit bigger so I don't have to squint my eyes to read it.
How come you made this post.
Kia ora Olivia Its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe School,
ReplyDeleteI like you math magic google drawing it is really cool, Maybe next time add a bit more about the maths you are learning and explain it a better better. But that is all I have to talk about so bye!
Kia ora olivia,
ReplyDeleteNice job! it's just I can't see the words quite well so just next time please put it in a different colour or font. I like how you have an example of a chocolate mhm yum! - Milla